Sponson Light

You have really good, clean lineart, I love the faces as well.

Most important part, criticism! I got some c&c, and so I fixed a few perspective problems, pose problems, and then changed the composition. Edit: Hay! Listen! Listen! Hay! Listen! Hay! ...

If these are related, put them in one thread, so we can all talk about them in one convienent place. Nice design on the chest, though his pose seems a ...

Too much gold :P Whats really bothering me right now is why is one of the orbs to the right of him colored fully in gold, but the one to ...

Truth be told, I'm not coloring it. Other truth to be told, I drew another picture, and I'll be coloring that :P Here, I'll walk you through it. Under sketch, ...

awesome. Love the style. Ya' know what it reminds me of? The 1950's-esque intros to the new forms in Wario Ware: Smooth Moves. That and Midna from Twilight Princess. [/nerd-rant] ...

It's rather cute but I'd like to see full colour! Full Color?! Okay, I try. I saved the lineart for this occasion, all that shading and glow and smoke are ...

Listen to Streetlight Manifesto! They're coming to my city on the 12th!

I love the pokemon game! and I dont even own it!

Kitty--no, the stomach muscles are fine. Snoinky--if you think women can't be ripped without Steroids, you should check out the ladies' track and field throwing team. Looks great, Sponson. Really ...

Okay, how do I go about fixing it? pointing out something isnt gonna help.

She has really masculine legs, and her stomach and neck look too muscled as well. Women's muscles are softer looking. Well good, they're suppose to be muscular. Soft is not ...

Yeah, I go to school and ask a few of the senior AP art students for criticism. They come up with like... 90% of the crits I get.